User:Devynbrandt/Chamberlain's dwarf salamander/CameronEGraham015 Peer Review

General info
(provide username) DevynBrandt
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Devynbrandt/Chamberlain's dwarf salamander - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Chamberlain's dwarf salamander - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * the changes seem pretty well written from what I understand.
 * The added information to the lead section is pretty good and descriptive.
 * The tone is neutral which is good.
 * I would recommend adding more information on the diet like giving examples of some things it could or would eat.
 * The links you used seemed to be good and relevant.