User:Dexvn/Saxitoxin/Bh17128 Peer Review

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Dexvn


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In your article I like how you provided changes and i saw that your article is extremely relevant to what was taught in class today. You added multiple sources related to this topic which all were update and very insightful. The more you added i could see that you made this article a more complete version of itself. Your sandbox has some missing components however its a start to something good. I also enjoyed the unbiased information you provided for this article.