User:Dfod2020/Jack O'Dell/Anthropologygirl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Jack O'Dell
 * Link to draft you're reviewing.
 * User:Dfod2020/Jack O'Dell - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists).
 * Jack O'Dell - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
You guys have a done a really good job on this article. You have added a lot of good relevant content.

The organization of the article looks great!

You do need to work a bit on the sentence structure in a few sections of the article. The early life section has a weird flow, and it feels very choppy. I think you could combine some of those sentences to make it more readable and flow better - especially the parts about his family.

This sentence in the MLK section could also be edited - "He worked with Martin Luther King Jr. O'Dell was a director of the Southern Christian Leadership Conference (SCLC)."

Your introduction paragraph is only one sentence so consider adding a little bit more content to that section.

Also try to find and add a picture.

Your sources look great! They are all fairly new sources, and it looks like you referenced everything correctly.