User:Dgorny3/Tap dance/Erildape Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dgorny3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dgorny3/Tap_dance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tap dance

Evaluate the drafted changes
The writer has planned to add their own section within the already existing article body. Their main focus is the impact that segregation has had on the development of tap dance, which has extreme relevance to the current article. There is a lot of good usage of internal links to other Wikipedia articles to further explain ideas. Within these two paragraphs, all three of the writer's sources have been used thoroughly, which consist of a Library of Congress article, news source, and an academic journal, all of which seem credible. I think the writer does a fair job at keeping a neutral tone throughout their sandbox partially because they consistently use a source citation at the end of each sentence.