User:Dgorny3/Tap dance/Linus Robideau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dgorny3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dgorny3/Tap_dance?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tap dance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this would be a great addition to the article given that the main article doesn't provide any information on segregation and tap dance. Everything that was written is relevant to the article topic and there are no distractors. I feel like you did a great job of maintaining neutrality while also describing how Black tap dancers were inappropriately represented and treated in tap dance. All of the citations work and each claim is supported by a reliable source. The sources are neutral and fairly recent. All of the information is up to date and relevant to the topic. I think linking the word "segregation" to its wikipedia article would be a good addition as you make your final touches. As a whole I think the addition will definitely improve the article because it offers a point of view that not many people see when it comes to tap dance. Also, you're covering wikipedia's equity gap which is great.