User:Dgriswold605/Sex reassignment surgery/Sandra1795 Peer Review

Topic is interesting and it provided a lot of information to someone who might not be well educated on the subject. Provided history of it as well and content was neutral.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

dgriswold605


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dgriswold605/Sex_reassignment_surgery?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex reassignment surgery

Evaluate the drafted changes
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 * The lead was not overly detailed as it let the reader know what was going to be discussed in the article.
 * Each article body draft gave a clear explanation to the certain type of surgery or procedure and how it works to help people who want to have a sex reassignment surgery.
 * It was interesting to add in how in different countries sex reassignment surgery is by law and and how it is also conducted differently in some places as well.
 * The content added in the article draft was neutral as it provided a lot of information to someone who might not know this topic well and can be able to learn more about it as it was given clear information about.