User:Dhar4601/Types of abortion restrictions in the United States/Willa Wei Peer Review

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Dhar4601
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dhar4601/Types of abortion restrictions in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Types of abortion restrictions in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.

Great work! I love how you revised the first sentence; it flows much better now! The added content has no grammatical or spelling errors, and it is well-organized.

All the additions you made to the article are relevant to the topic, and the sources you used support the claims very well. The article maintains a neutral tone, and all the links work. Additionally, I noticed that the topic you chose is "Types of abortion restrictions in the United States," but in your draft, you mainly discussed Alabama, Mississippi, and the Florida panhandle area. It might be helpful to add a sentence clarifying why you specifically focused on these states.

Another observation is that you do not have a "Lead" section, but you have clearly showed what you did to improve the article. Your future plan also looks great!