User:Dhar4601/Types of abortion restrictions in the United States/Xiajiao3510 Peer Review

General info
Dhar4601
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dhar4601/Types of abortion restrictions in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Types of abortion restrictions in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, the changes you made are professional and meaningful. I think your first revision, "Many states ... the counseling and abortion," can be more accurate by including the time of the data and the exact number of state instead of saying "many states." Your second revision, "For women of color, ... in their state," adds an intersectional perspective to the original text. The situation of women from minority groups is worth emphasizing because they have been impacted disproportionally.

Your plan of cleaning up the article and changing outdated information makes sense. Looking forward to your further revision!