User:Dhaynes0/Cane toad/Abihoover Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dhaynes0


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Had to use word document


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cane toad

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article contains a good amount of information relevant to the Cane toad, the information added is a positive contribution to the Wikipedia article, and is presented in a clear, concise way. One way to improve the addition to the article is by including more detail on what physiology makes it possible for Cane toads to be able to adjust their thermal tolerance so quickly. By adding these details, it will help explain the physiology behind the Cane toad's adaptations for cold environments and can be a valuable addition to the article. This article is organized very well with clear sections that are organized in a sensible order. The new information added in the "Ecology, behavior, and life history" subheader was placed in a great spot that makes sense and maintains the flow of information. Every section is fairly equal in length and importance and all the information is relevant to the topic. The article is neutral and is backed by reliable sources.