User:DiMel08/Benigno Montoya Muñoz/Iitzlrod Peer Review

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Username: DiMelo8's

Article on artist Benigno Montoya Muñoz.



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To begin, I think the article flows extremely well, its clear and stays on topic. I'm impressed with the abstract, it provides a short introductory of the artist and how his work developed over his lifetime. I think the author also does a great job at answering questions an individual would have when researching someone on a wiki page. Everything provided is relevant and up to date. The information provided also seems to be backup by a reliable source and all the links of the references provided. Overall, the author did a great job with including reliable sources of information, but as well as organizing their article. Each paragraph discusses different points of the life of the artist. If I were to suggest any changes that the author can apply, I would say to just be careful with grammatical errors, such as coma placements and unnecessary spaces in-between words. There are not many errors, I just noticed that the first sentence of the abstract needs a coma, so be careful with that! I've been struggling to start my article so reading served as great example of how I should structure my own. Overall great article.