User:Dianelivingston/Tolani Asuni/Pickles and Jupiter Peer Review

This was a well written article and I enjoyed reading it. A few minor suggestions are as follows:


 * 1) You mention that Asuni is credited for promoting mental health in Africa. Is there a specific country that this mental health promotion occurred, or is it multiple?
 * 2) I appreciate you stating the specifics of what he did in his career to promote mental health and improve the psychiatric landscape
 * 3) In the theory section, I am just wondering if Asuni was able to successful integrate two complementary (and perhaps at times contradictory) approaches of western medicine with traditional practices? If so, what did this look like?
 * 4) Overall, well written and no concerns about the flow, spelling, or grammar!

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