User:Dianwakeham/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Janet Maguire

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I love listening to music and I find that it helps me concentrate more than distract me when I am doing work. I wanted to broaden my taste for music and not only just listen to it but understand it. I choose Janet Maguire because she is an American music composer but lived in Italy; I feel like her opinion on music may be influenced by Italian culture and I am eager to hear what she has to say/critic.

Evaluate the article
The article gave a basic summary of where she was from and what college she attended. It was a short, somewhat detailed bibliography but there was not enough information about her critics. There is a list of all her works at the end of the article, but there is no explanation as to what inspired her or her views on music. Since I clicked music critics, I expected to hear her opinions on music. The page was last edited in January 2023, so I thought it would have more info and be more up to date. The article is non bias though and goes through the basic facts Janet Maguire. Two of the three sources were from the same website but they all worked. It was a very easy article to read but is not broke down into any specific topics or concepts for the reader to gain any extended knowledge.

Why did Janet Maguire move to Italy and what knowledge on music influenced or changed her opinions?