User:Diarcane/Nanochemistry/TROLLSworldtour Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Xiaoxu Qing


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Xiaoxu%20Qing/Nanochemistry?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nanochemistry

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:


 * lead has been updated, and mentions the sections added

Content:


 * content added is relevant to the topic
 * content is up to date

Tone and Balance:


 * content added is neutral

Sources and References:


 * citations are present throughout the page, but the research section seems to be undercited
 * references are current and relevant, and support the article
 * links work

Organization:


 * content added is well organized
 * editing is suggested to remove grammatical errors and improve writing clarity

Images and Media:


 * none added

Overall Impressions:


 * lots of info is presented on this page!
 * well organized and interesting content
 * in the applications section, both the medicine and cosmetic subsections talk about sunscreen
 * it would make more sense to talk about sunscreen in only one of these sections/combine the info from both these sections
 * look into improving the citations of sections already present on the page
 * maybe add some pictures, as the wiki page is very text heavy