User:Dibiasei/Lampocteis/MarcelaCurcio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kirsten Stanislawski


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dibiasei/Lampocteis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lampocteis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Considering that there was not much information in the original article, I think that this group did a good job of adding in a lot of new information. They added three new sections and made the article more organized with the placement of information. there are sources for all the new information that was added. I don't think you need to change any of the wording - I think that it sounds great! I think it would be good to add some images to the article and maybe a section that talks about the new research that has come out with your organism.