User:DiceyDomino/Mewing (facial restructuring technique)/Beefamus Peer Review

General info
I'm reviewing DiceyDomino's article.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to the draft you're reviewing:Mewing (facial restructuring technique)

Evaluate the drafted changes
- All of the information in this article was relevant to the topic. Nothing distracted me.

- The article is neutral since it didn't include any biases. The article only included factual and relevant information.

- I think that all of the necessary information is included in the article; nothing else should be added or removed.

- In regards to the citations, the links work and all of the sources support the information that was presented.

- Each fact is supported by a reliable refrence and there again, is no bias.

- The information isn't out of date. Everything is relevant.

- I think that the grammatical errors should be fixed (efficiacy --> efficacy).