User:Diego CD/Women's National Basketball Association/Violetlopaze6 Peer Review

General info
Batooldembinski, Diego CD, Seashellll218
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Diego CD/Women's National Basketball Association
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women's National Basketball Association

Evaluate the drafted changes
This group did a good job with giving background information on the wage gap between the NBA and The WNBA. They even began the article by giving the definition, saying, "Gender pay gap in sports is the difference in pay between men and women in the sports industry." They also explained the various reasons why WNBA players are payed less than NBA players. They did not focus on only one reason, but many reasons given from multiple sources. The section titled "revenue and viewership" provided extra background on one of the specific reasons why The WNBA receives less pay. One change I would suggest making would be to maybe give a specific example of the smaller pay and its effects. I know Brittney Griner could be a good example of how the smaller pay affects the players. Also more material could be added to the section titled "What this means for the future of the WNBA." I think more things could be added about if things are trying to change or how it could be changed. These changes would add to the article by giving more specific examples so people could understand the wage gap and how it could be changed. Also, the group could add links to other articles/sources on Wikipedia that could help the reader to explore more information on the topic to really understand it. I think the most important thing the authors can do to improve the article is to just expand with more examples and ways for the reader to really understand the topic. One thing I noticed about this article that I would like to use in my own is the organization and the way it is broken up. I think it is organized very well and makes it easy to understand. Also, the authors stayed very neutral when writing about their topic, which is something I need to keep remembering to do in my own article. ~