User:Dikshas05/Julie Morning After Pill/Maddiebayley Peer Review

General info
Diksha05
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is overall very strong and does a good job of summarizing the overall ideas of the article. I think that the lead could be more well-constructed and reworded to keep the readers engaged. Adding a preview of what will be covered in the page would be really helpful as well. The lead section does a good job of being concise and to the point.

Content

I believe that most of the content added is relevant to the overall idea of the article. I personally wouldn't include the information about the founders having previously founded Starface, but would keep the information about co-founding Mented Cosmetics. I feel like the information about Mented Cosmetics is important because it shows how the founder had previous experience in the market and with women's experiences in their communities. The content added is very well researched and up to date.

Tone and Balance

The overall tone of the article is very balanced and neutral. I really appreciated how the article presents the facts without forcing a specific point of view.

Sources and References

The sources of this article are modern and well sourced. Overall, I think there should be more sources in this article but this is a great start!

Organization

Overall the organization of the article is great, but the content could be presented in a way that is more clear and concise for the reader. I think that this is such a solid rough draft and with some revision will be a perfect addition.

Images and Media

There are currently no images or media in the article but a picture of what the box looks like or something similar I think would add a lot to the article.

Overall Impressions

My overall impression was that this article was well thought out and well written. I think that with some revisions, this article would be a perfect addition to Wikipedia. Great job!