User:Dikshas05/Julie Morning After Pill/Varino777 Peer Review

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Dikshas05
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: "Julie also provides a box" - what is in the box? what does this mean / Also, what is BLACK ENTERPRISE? and why is it capitalized ?

Content: I noticed the first sentence of the origin section was wordy. I also felt like the whole origin sections tone was relatively casual. I think the actual content was very informative but there were a lot of sentences I think could be combined or slightly edited to make it sound more professional.

Tone: sounded neutral to me and with no bias!

Images: It would be nice to see some photos of the product or photos of anything to spice up the page (like the founders for example).

Organization: I believe the article was organized well. no one section was too long and there was lots of information provided in each.

This was a really good article! my biggest piece of advice is just to combine some of the sentences so it flows better but really good job !