User:Dimahal/Environmental issues in the Philippines/Devashree818 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Dimahal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dimahal/Environmental issues in the Philippines


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental issues in the Philippines

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)