User:Ding4422/Witness Protection/AB1967 Peer Review

General info
Ding 4422
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Ding4422/Witness Protection
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the understanding shown of the article you have chosen to work on. You have a good guideline as to how you are going to structure the article. I think that more content would help with your article. I think this stands as the most important thing for you to do.