User:Dinnerghost/Clothing in ancient Greece/Gooseberri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dinnerghost


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Dinnerghost/Clothing in ancient Greece
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Clothing in ancient Greece

Lead
Very good! Nice and slimmed down, nothing seems to take precedence over anything else, great addition of dates!

Clarity
Breaking up the lead and adding the textiles section really helped with the organization of the article. I would try to add more images wherever you can.

Balance
Nothing seemed off topic or unnecessary, I don't know if you plan of keeping any of the things in the article that were not pasted into your sandbox, but researching some of those more and adding more to those sections should help.

Neutrality
Nothing jumped out at me, good job!

Other comments
This is really well done, and a great improvement from the original article.