User:Dinosaurchicken03/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * (Blood lead level)


 * Article Evaluation
 * - Article's content is relevant to the topic, but the information is heavily focused on BLLs in the United States instead of across the world (i.e. imbalance in discussion of BLLs in different countries)
 * - CDC used as a large source in this article, but since it's a medical article, we should be looking for secondary sources that combine information from a variety of primary sources
 * - talk page mentions including information about how acceptable blood lead levels have changed overtime in regulation, which is still not included within the actual article


 * Sources
 * https://www.vdh.virginia.gov/epidemiology/epidemiology-fact-sheets/elevated-blood-lead-levels-in-adults/

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Hyperhidrosis


 * Article Evaluation
 * - Contains a lot of information that could be better broken down by visuals that summarize the different categories
 * - information should be included from medical textbooks instead of media articles to provide trustworthy and stronger citations for the page
 * - ensure that there is no bias or any use of words that indicate that the article is in favor of or against a certain procedure or treatment for hyperhidrosis


 * Sources
 * https://publications.aap.org/aapbooks/book/517/chapter-abstract/5807342/Hyperhidrosis?redirectedFrom=fulltext

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Mixed tension migraine


 * Article Evaluation
 * - this article does not contain current diagnostic criteria from the International Classification of Headache Disorders, so these information needs to be addded to make the article more comprehensive
 * - only 4 sources; more sources need to be added
 * - lack of information about treatment and what particular symptoms would lead a physician to treat the mixed tension migraine as a migraine or tension headache specifically


 * Sources

https://ihs-headache.org/en/resources/guidelines/