User:DionnaTaylor/Olivie Blake/Khascall Peer Review

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 * User:DionnaTaylor/Olivie Blake


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Lead
The lead is good, very concise (copyedit needed though: "of which was a"). Not 100% sure what this should be or I'd fix it.

Content
The content is good; seems encyclopedic and relevant. Do you have some figures on book sales perhaps?

Also, I am thinking about the rules about establishing notability. The guideline says: "The person has created or played a major role in co-creating a significant or well-known work or collective body of work. In addition, such work must have been the primary subject of multiple independent periodical articles or reviews, or of an independent and notable work (for example, a book, film, or television series, but usually not a single episode of a television series)" -- since the series isn't live yet, it might not be enough. Library Journal is good, but can we find more reviews and/or profiles of her in independent newspapers or magazines? I see a Kirkus Review, a LocusMag review, https://www.thetimes.co.uk/article/booktok-recommendations-most-popular-books-on-tiktok-ksd5s629j, https://www.sundaypost.com/fp/books-atlas-six/ Working all these into the text makes sense, I think.

I think this is in pretty good shape but it's important to connect the dots. The ultimate answer might be that this article ends up merged with the Atlas Six article, but let's see how it fares as an independent article first.

Tone and Balance
The tone seems solid.

Sources and References
Pretty solid -- see previous comments.

Organization
The format looks good to me. Check the way that Mark Twain handles the 'pen name - real name' situation -- in the infobox for example.

Images and Media
None added; I don't see any free images in commons unfortunately.

Overall impressions
Overall this is in good shape; keep working: success is in sight!