User:Diqi Yan/Aurelia coerulea/Jlsenn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Diqi Yan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Diqi%20Yan/Aurelia_coerulea?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aurelia coerulea

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good opening, but seems a bit choppy. While you have provided a good basis of what you are going to talk about, there may be a better way to make the opening flow better. Good sources on all parts of article. I would go into a bit more detail about what you are talking about. Maybe provide pictures so readers have a better idea? Good life cycle section. Add more about potential use. Since you talked about blooming problems, maybe add more in a later section about what exactly the blooming does in relation to causing these problems. What kind of biotechnological and pharmaceutical uses could they provide exactly? I would add more sections such as diet, ecology, characteristics, etc. Overall good start, but definitely need to add information to further explain what you already have and give us a better idea of where these moon jellyfish are all about!