User:Dirtieee12

About me
I'm a student at Everett Community College, and I have aspirations of working in a medical setting, more specifically, as a Registered Nurse. My favorite hobbies include graphic design, watching American football, and writing informative captions for my football related posts on my social media accounts. My favorite NFL player ever is Kam Chancellor, who was selected to the Pro Bowl 4 times in his 8 year career.

My Wikipedia interests
If I am active on Wikipedia in the future, I'd like to have a chance to update professional athlete pages every season, to show their most recent statistics. I'm a huge fan of comparing players using statistics, and writing about how their team environment affects their individual performance. If not sports, I would like to edit pages of hip-hop artists to remove any bias that could be found on their page.

Article Evaluation
I visited the Deondre Francois article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: things that were left out from the article, how up-to-date it is, and how under-represented some areas are. This page really interests me, because it is one of the American football players I have known for years.

The completeness of the article concerns me. Many things were left out of the article, specifically, game logs and statistics. Not every game needs to be described in the article, but there should be more sections describing his most important career games. Another section that is missing is Francois' reason for leaving the Florida State University football program. He was accused by his ex-girlfriend of domestic violence on an Instagram post. Following the post, former FSU head coach Willie Taggart announced Francois was being dismissed from the Florida State Seminoles football program.

The age of the article isn't much of a concern, but still noteworthy. The last edit that was made was a 9 word sentence in late 2020. It was an update on Deondre's new professional career, which should be much longer than one sentence. There are more things that could be talked about, such as his team name, and when his season debut is.

Some areas of the article are under-represented, such as his collegiate career section. They don't even mention his accolades, even though he earned important ones in 2016. There isn't a single sentence mentioning him declaring for the 2020 NFL Draft.

The main issue with the entire article is how much important information is missing from it. When looking up Deondre Francois, I'd imagine people want to see more detailed information about his promising collegiate career, and the start of his professional career. It has been updated regularly, but not in a timely fashion.