User:Dirtyterp/1975 Haicheng earthquake/Johnskae Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dirtyterp, Kmcgowa2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dirtyterp/1975_Haicheng_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1975 Haicheng earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) the first thing that jumps out to me after looking at your sandbox is that you do not have any in text citations. These are crucial for wikipedia and you should definitely be keeping track of where you take information from. This will only help you more in the end and make your lives so much easier because then you wont have to go back to find the links of the sources you used to find the information. Im also a little confused as to the direction you are going. It seems like you are going to split up the one big main paragraph and add more information about the predictions. If so, you are probably going to want to take out that information from the original article so it is not redundant.  It seems like there are no good photos, depicting any type of damages, so you should try to looks for some of those as well. It seems like you just wrote a summary of the earthquake rather then going into detail about a specific part of it. good luck.