User:Dirtyterp/1975 Haicheng earthquake/Rjones222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

1975 Haicheng earthquake group


 * to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dirtyterp/1975_Haicheng_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

1975 Haicheng earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For the 1975 Haicheng earthquake groups article, I feel there is a lot of material that can be added to the article including pictures and maybe even a graph. I completely agree with the section they have in the sandbox titled Prediction, because this particular earthquake is unique in that it was the first earthquake successfully predicted and the article needs to go more in depth to that. Additionally, I would add more information about the aftermath and the damage that was caused to the area along with what the damage might have been if the earthquake had not been successfully predicted. I believe the content you have prepared is well written and seems to be pretty well organized.

Lloyd's Response
Thank you for your response and compliments towards our group. In terms of the prediction of the earthquake, that is the main area we are trying to go in depth in. The suggestion to go in depth in the other subgroups could also be extremely beneficial and is noted for the future.