User:Dirtyterp/1975 Haicheng earthquake/Ssathien Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dirtyterp, Kmcgowa2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dirtyterp/1975_Haicheng_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1975 Haicheng earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Though the article is not finished, I could tell that you put a lot of effort into it. The paragraph for the prediction of the earthquake was very detailed. You mentioned a lot of background context in order for the reader to make sense of the prediction. I did not sense any bias in your article, so good job on that. One interesting part is toward the end when you said that records were not kept well in the cultural revolution in China. You have not posted your bibliography yet, though, so I do not have a way to verify your information. Overall, it is a good start to the article.

Kevin's Reply
Thank you for acknowledging the positive aspects of our contributions so far. We definitely need to add in our sources so thank you for pointing that out to us. We will be sure to add in the sources we have so far in short order.