User:Divvem/be bold

Being bold is important on Wikipedia.

Article I chose: Swing vote

Being bold is important on Wikipedia.
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? The only part of this article I saw issue with was the way it incorporated third party voting. As one of the people mentioned in the "Talk" page, this is not necessarily relevant when talking about swing voters. This could distract from what a swing voter really is.
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? I believe, despite how little information is there that this is unbiased.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? This is very much centered around the United States as one of the biggest parts of this page is the "Demographics within the United States" and it could be helpful to expand this concept beyond just this country.
 * Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? The last link does not work and takes you to an error page when you click on it. The sources support the claims in the article.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? There is a lot of information that could be added to this article. There is not enough information for the reader to get an accurate understanding but the information is up to date.