User:Djcandy2012/User:Lillyanacut/Gelsen Gas/Djcandy2012 Peer Review

General info
Lillyanacut
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Lillyanacut/Gelsen Gas
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gelsen Gas

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
Very strong lead and leaves an impression the fact the film was featured really gets across that this guy was important.

Content
As of 4/19/2024 there is still a lot of content missing, I'm just seeing titles. Some information from the original Wikipedia page is still missing as well.

Tone and Balance
Falls within the image and guidelines that Wikipedia tries to adhere to.

Sources and References
Checked out the sources you have and they seem fantastic! one of your citation does have an error though so make sure to fill in that missing information, as that link does not work. Lastly more cites needed If you need more books remember the library has a chat box you can use to ask a librarian for help, that was a game changer for me. he also seems to have a pretty decent internet presence, google brought up some good resources.

Organization
So far so good seems fine to me all is in the order provided by the teacher.

Images and media
Nothing so far but if you do use new images remember to give them a description and keep it short and literal in a sense.

Overall Impression
Severely unfinished. There's really not much to look at.

P.S. I'm more than happy to come back into the chat and give some criticism once this is complete if I have the time. Life happens, so If you planned to put this all in on Saturday sorry I couldn't wait but I work Saturday and Sunday and would struggle to find time to review.