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Hello my name is David Pinedo, I enjoy hiking and playing video games in my spare time. I decided to enroll in this class to further expand my knowledge on what it means to be healthy and to see others views on what it means as well.

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Jerome Caja

I feel like everything is relevant to the article content although a little limited on information. Needs to include things like his greatest accomplishments and any other recognition he received for his work.

The artcile appears to be neutral to me no claims or frames that appear to be biased.

Jeromes early life I feel is underrepresented espcially his family background. I feel like thier needs to be some information on his mother and father because that has an impact on what shapes him into the person he becomes.

All the links appear to be working and accurate.

In the talk page people are planning to add more about his accomplishments through the years.

This article is within scope of the WikiProject Biography, WikiProject California,  WikiProject Visual arts and is of interest of the WikiProject LGBT studies. And is rated stub-class currently.

The death part of the article doesn't really go into much detail like we discussed in class, it is a very basic understanding of the processes of HIV/AIDS.

-Early life and education--- Edit

Jerome Caja was born on January 20, 1958 in Cleveland, Ohio. Raised in a strict Catholic family, Caja was one of 11 sons. He referred to his family as a family full of jocks, although he himself was a frail sickly child. Caja growing up in a Catholic household was early on heavily influenced by imagery of saints and martyrs. Caja graduated from St. Edward High School, an all-boys catholic school, where he suffered poor grades due to dyslexia. Caja began his college education at Cuyahoga Community College and later attended Cleveland State University where he earned a Bachelor of Fine Arts degree in 1984. He then moved to San Francisco to attend the San Francisco Art Institute and graduated with a Master of Fine Arts degree in

What I plan to contribute to the plague:
-Attempt to add more information about his early life, try to go into further detail about his early life.

-Fix some grammar issues/ overall balance in the tone of language

-Expand on his accomplishments while being in the senate.

JOURNAL ARTICLE

= Social Conflict and the Politics of Reform: Mayor James D. Phelan and the San Francisco Waterfront Strike of 1901 = John Elrick

California History

Vol. 88, No. 2 (2011), pp. 4-23, 54-56

Early Years (Plague)
Phelan was born in San Francisco, the son of James Phelan and Alice Kelly. James Phelan (1819-1892) was an Irish immigrant who became wealthy during the California Gold Rush as a trader, merchant, banker and real estate investor. His father left behind him a forturne, but Phelan was more interested in Political matters rather than shadowing his fathers footsteps.