User:Djrascal14/Twins in mythology/Dylan66taylor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Djrascal14)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Djrascal14/Twins_in_mythology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twins_in_mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello! I notice that there is not much I can peer review since nothing has been added quite yet. That is perfectly okay, but I would suggest gathering sources for your topic to begin drafting. Your article has a lot of potential due to it being so short already. After reading the article, I found that there are only two examples of twins in mythology. I think a good way to start is by finding more examples of twins in mythology, find reliable sources for it, and to start typing something up about them. Your lead needs to act like an introductory paragraph with a 'topic' sentence too.. Along with that, you will need additional content to support your topic backed up with evidence from those sources. Good luck on your article!