User:Djsi2135/Pin-pen merger/Grizziegin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sophia Medley; DJSI2135


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/University_of_Kentucky/American_English_(Spring_2022)&diff=prev&oldid=1076339516


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phonological history of English close front vowels

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Guiding questions:

The introduction and organization is fluid and well organized.

Content

Guiding questions:


 * The content is relevant and appears to be current information.

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:


 * The content is natural and explains how the Pin-Pen merger happens.

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

The links within the article function properly.

Organization

Guiding questions:

The article also gives lots of examples regarding different locations on how that location performs the merger.

Overall Impression: This link has lots of useful information. It could also be a great resource for someone that could be struggling to understand this merger.