User:Djward21/Psychological resilience/Deezytings Peer Review

General info
Djward21
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Djward21/Psychological_resilience?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Psychological resilience

Evaluate the drafted changes
There are no changes to the lead sentence. It still holds strong to tell the reader what will be covered in the article. The additions to the second paragraph help to expand on the main ideas. The content is very relevant however does not speak to any of the equity gaps. I wonder how said groups are related to and handle the topic. There is no media and I do not believe that any would be useful to the article. The sources vary and are up to date yet are only centered around the overview. Overall this article is extremely well written.