User:Dkag12/1994 California Proposition 187/Evelynanstanford Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dkag12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dkag12/1994_California_Proposition_187?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits and content that have been added are full of useful facts, supported by reliable sources, and helps to bridge gaps in already present information. The information written does not take a particular stance and contributes to proper representation of a group of people. A multitude of primary sources are very suitable to the information added. All of the sentences flow together neatly and can be understood by a wide audience. After making a few edits to grammar, this passage is overall full of details that contribute to the article's full understanding of its topic.