User:DkendraS/Sexual anorexia/Pgunter99 Peer Review

Kendra,

This is Peyton. Overall, I thought you did a great job of analyzing the sources that were in the article and questioning their validity. I thought you were very thorough with your reasonings for taking away and adding to this article.

One suggestion I have is that you consider adding to the causes section of your article. It is very short and could use some extra information to boost it up. Maybe you're adding to that section already, but I'm not 100% sure. Overall, I think you did a good job!

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