User:Dlnappo/International Women's Strike/Nylaj123 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username): Dlnappo, Shanaz66
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User talk:Shanaz66/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?: Yes, it talks about two place that participated in the women's strike?
 * Is the content added up-to-date?: Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?: Everything that added seems to fit topic, but I'm sure more could be added.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?: Yes, nothing seems biased
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?:No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?:No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?: No, it's just informative

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?: Seems so
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?: I think it was very interesting in aspect of the parts the students added. It was. an easy read, making it easy to follow and understand.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? I think the part on Spain was very interesting.
 * How can the content added be improved? More could be added

Overall evaluation
I enjoyed the read and it was very informative based on what I read. I was not aware of the topic so it was all new information and I thought it was well articulated an displayed. I t was an easy read and follow, allowing me to comprehend the work and retain information. However, I'm sure more could be added to make it better, I'd give it a 40 out of 50.