User:Dlporter83/Donskoy cat/Jneezy504 Peer Review

I like the addition of a demeanor and physical characteristics category for your article. I might elaborate on the attitude of the cat, in how they are different than other breeds, and move a the few mentioned there to the other category for physical characteristics.

I also really like the breed standard info included, but it reads a little like it was cut and pasted there. In the way that a standard title with information to follow can repeat the word in a weird way. IE: " Ears The ears are large..."

Overall great job! I like the choice of info you focused on.

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