User:Dls224/Step dance/Machara13 Peer Review

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Dls224
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Step dance
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Dls224/Step dance :Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The edit was small, however I think it was really interesting and I thought it added a good bit of information to the page.