User:Dm0507/Ultrasound-enhanced systemic thrombolysis/Adrienne Workman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dm0507


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dm0507/Ultrasound-enhanced_systemic_thrombolysis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ultrasound-enhanced systemic thrombolysis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead has not been updated yet.

Content
The content is relevant to the topic, and the studies seem current. I like the headings, and I think this gives a great overview of UEST. It might be nice to add a section on side effects.

Tone and Balance
The tone is mostly neutral. I would be careful in the "Limitations and Future Directions" section, it comes off a bit persuasive about the promise of UEST.

Sources and References
References have not been added yet, but the studies mentioned sound current.

Organization
The organization of the article with headings and subheadings is great. The reading level is relatively high, but this is a difficult topic to make readable to a layperson. Using either UEST or sonothrombolysis throughout may make it easier to read. Also adding links to other Wikipedia articles may make it easier for readers.

Images and Media
No images yet, but picture to be added under ischemic stroke.

Overall Impression
This is a great addition to the article. There are still a couple things to be done, including citations and links, but overall it is a strong draft.