User:Dmant1/sandbox

ARTICLE EVALUATION

Paul's case evaluation notes.
 * The end of the plot summary sounds like a claim that could use more backing
 * Calling the story a gay suicide in the criticism and significance this story seems out of place and almost like vandalism without any links to this claim
 * Criticism and significance tab is lacking stating what no-named critics though without any support.
 * The set-up seems fine and well organized