User:Dmd458/Rock climbing/Kuroko19148 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dmd458


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dmd458/Rock_climbing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rock climbing

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sources and References

I saw that you have cited every line for the 'types of holds.' This has greatly contributed to Wikipedia and will be beneficial for others when they come across and read the information.

Are images well-captioned?

I also saw that you added an image and briefly captioned the image in a clear manner. The additional image does help viewers understand the topic of the article.

Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

From the information you edited, there is no bias incorporated into the writing. Each description that describes the the types of hold is informative as to what it is. Good job on this part.

How can the content added be improved?

One thing that I would suggest is to edit the article a little more. I am having a hard time seeing what contributions were made compared to what was already written on Wikipedia.