User:Dmd458/Rock climbing/Nvm32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

dmd458


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dmd458/Rock_climbing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rock climbing

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There really isn't anything in the draft in the sandbox yet as they are editing an existing article. I would give it some time for them to have their edits done as they are waiting on a source due to it expiring.