User:Dmersh/Baseball bat/Jthatcher01 Peer Review

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 * User:Dmersh/Baseball bat/Jthatcher01 Peer Review
 * User:Dmersh/Baseball bat/Jthatcher01 Peer Review

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This article is well written out and formatted. It could use a little bit more in depth detail and explaining. Not everyone knows about baseball and bats as much as others so it is important that there is never any lack of detail in any way. I also am including information about softball and bats into my article so I did find some great information I could somehow incorporate into mine. Great job.