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Hey, welcome to the Star Wars WikiProject! Deckiller 03:28, 8 March 2006 (UTC)

GA
The reason why User:Zzzzz failed Padmé Amidala is because of a new policy which squeeked by without anyone noticing it. See What_is_a_good_article and its discussion page. You may express any opposition on the talk page there. Cheers. Gflores Talk 21:17, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

Not Vandalism
It's chronological accuracy - when talking about Padme's lifetime you dont use a term which was coined after her death. As for the rest of the vandalism that wasnt my intention - for some reason i was looking at old version of the page when i made my edit - i would have fixed my blunder but didnt remember in time - for which i apologise. I am an Administrator and wiki veteran so please dont disrespect me in future. PMA 08:24, 14 April 2006 (UTC)
 * I'm finding it happening to other articles when i try to edit - i'm going to ask the Techs to check the wiki software. PMA 11:48, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Halloween
You have in fact addressed all of my concerns. The article is extremely well researched and full of interesting info regarding the production of this influential film. I've indicated my support for the article as a Featured Article. Good luck!Hal Raglan 19:37, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Your work on the articles for the first three Halloween films is excellent. Would you be interested in starting a WikiProject for horror?  I've been kicking around that idea for a while, since the majority of horror-related articles are somewhat lacking.  I'm not sure if there's need/interest, since most "horror" crosses over with other WikiProjects (e.g. WP:FILM, WP:NOVEL), but I just thought I'd throw it out there.  Keep up the good work.  --Myles Long 14:57, 3 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I've set up a temporary project page at User:Myleslong/WikiProject Horror. I added you as a project participant.  Feel free to edit it however you like, if you're even interested.  Let me know what you think. --Myles Long 17:44, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

Jabba the Hutt rewrite
Nice work on the Jabba the Hutt rewrite! I'm a huge Star Wars fan, but I've been working to rewrite a lot of the Star Wars articles to draw more of a connection to the "real world", instead of merely the Star Wars universe. It's great to see another person taking such initiative! I hope you plan on reworking some more of the Star Wars articles, too! – Mipadi 16:59, 3 May 2006 (UTC)

Halloween III
The parenthetical aside: "(following the original Halloween)" in the plot summary doesn't really make sense. I didn't want to just remove it, but at present Iit has less than perfect clarity. Keep up the good work. --Fuhghettaboutit 23:24, 3 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I went back to the passage we just hammered out and was going to make a change but saw your edits. I'm not sure from the edits if the other "few brief scenes" from Halloween appear somehwere esle in the film or if they are a few brioef scenes appearing in the commercial for Halloween. If the latter, here's my suggested text:


 * In fact, the only nod to the previous films appearing in Halloween III is a television commercial appearing in the film itself, advertizing that an airing of Halloween will occur on Halloween night in which a few brief scenes from Halloween are shown.

--Fuhghettaboutit 00:33, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

Horror Wikiproject
Those templates look good; you're right, templates are pretty simple to create. Do we want to stick with horror films for this project, or do we want to include other types of horror (novels, etc)? Either way works for me. Maybe films would be best to start? --Myles Long 19:22, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * The problem with the table you were using was that, on the last line, you had "|-}", and you should have had "|}". I fixed it.  This was a really good idea, thanks for adding that to the project page.  --Myles Long 16:14, 6 May 2006 (UTC)

Halloween III: Season of the Witch
Amazing work on this article too. The refs could use a bit of work (someharper refs needs combination, and URL should be made more explicit). I did an update at Halloween II (film) over that, but I'm not sure I have the time for this one. Circeus 23:22, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I would like to nominate this article as an FA. Would you mind me doing so? --Myles Long 15:11, 11 May 2006 (UTC)

Horror barnstar

 * That's really cool! Let's use it. --Myles Long 22:41, 5 May 2006 (UTC)

Real Cool
Just like to give congratulations on your Halloween contributions - the one's you've edited are far superior to the others. Are you going to add to character sub articles like Laurie Strode and so on? Anyway take care LuciferMorgan 15:59, 8 May 2006 (UTC)

I'd like to contribute to the horror wikiproject yes, but the majority of my time is taken up writing for a music website called Rockdetector, interviewing bands and. I can make minor contributions though. I know how you feel about being burnt out, I get that too. I'd just take your time. How come your articles seem to zillions of references? It's real professional. Are there sites you commonly use? If so feel free to divulge.

I feel that horror fiction lags behind horror in film on wiki and is something that could be addrssed, though since I've never contributed to a wiki article on a book I wouldn't know how to address this.

Although Halloween is a featured article, it doesn't have a star by the side which all others do. Just find that odd that's all. On the Halloween II page you could mention Rick Rosenthal went on to direct Halloween : Resurrection.

With those Halloween movies... if you own them on DVD listen to the commentaries, they'll help, and with A Nightmare on Elm Street. Mentions where the boiler room scenes were filmed on the commentary to that one and stuff. I'm glad you've largely avoided a trivia sectionm, they always feel tacky - it's always best to mould that information into the article.

If the Halloween films are your favourites then cool, though if it's just to improve the horror presence it could be better to place them in order of importance, like doing films such as Friday the 13th, Evil Dead etc. LuciferMorgan 23:28, 9 May 2006 (UTC)

Your Advice is Needed
Hello, I'm a big fan of what you've done with some of the Halloween articles like I previously mentioned. I wouldn't mind, in my own time, doing what you did to the Halloween articles to the odd horror film. I've never made a significant contribution to a film article though (only infoboxes really), so I find the idea daunting. Could you give me detailed advice, especially on the links and referencing bit? I haven't got a clue where to start LuciferMorgan 02:45, 12 May 2006 (UTC)

Reply
"I removed your nomination of Halloween III: Season of the Witch from GA because it is currently at FAC. Please go there if you have any comments to make. Thanks! Dmoon1 03:11, 12 May 2006 (UTC)"

That's what I did. The comment I made for the FAC was that it was not note-worthy enough to be featured but should be made a GA. --SeizureDog 03:15, 12 May 2006 (UTC)

Halloween III Advice (Only Minor)
This might sound silly, but try to trace down any places where "was" and "were" is used, and try to rephrase the sentences which use these. A general example below;

"He was going to the shop"

"He went to the shop"

I don't know if you notice the difference in the two similar sentences, but it's meant to illustrate how if you slightly rework a sentence it flows much better. This advice works across the board I feel LuciferMorgan 19:45, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

More Info for Halloween (film) article
I don't know if you knew this, but Christopher Lee was the first person offered the role of Dr. Sam Loomis. Maybe a google search will throw up more information. It would be worth adding to the article. LuciferMorgan 23:56, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

editing help
It's a difficult issue, and one that strikes at the heart of just how WP will improve the standard of its prose. Establishing a list of WPians who are skilled at copy-editing would be very helpful, but I suspect that those people won't want to spend all of their time fixing up other people's prose. Establishing subject-based projects (there are already quite a few) might enable the co-opting of willing contributors who will copy-edit FACs before or during nomination.

I'm a professional editor, and heck, I give a lot of unpaid time to critiqueing FACs; this is my way of forcing the issue, and it appears to be having some success. The bottom line is that nominators just have to find ways of getting their text edited so that it's up to scratch. Occasionally I help, but usually only if I know the WPian or am interested in the topic. Neither applies here, sadly.

Have you tried posting nice messages on people's talk pages? Research the FAC archives and the history pages of good articles in this area; identify reviewers and contributors who've successfully worked on those articles; show that you know what they've done in your message on their page. That might help.

A good way of improving your own prose is to:
 * display an earlier version of an FAC that you see has received complaints on the basis of Criterion 2a;
 * read through the early version critically, trying to identify the faults,
 * use the 'compare' function (on the 'history' page of the article) to compare that version with the final one in the FAC room, to identify what you missed.

But that doesn't solve the immediate issue, I know. You need to network in the community, establishing useful contacts in this respect.

Tony 03:33, 14 May 2006 (UTC)

Gremlins
Hi Dmoon, just to let you know I tried cutting down the plot on Gremlins a bit. As for your sanity and the Wikibreak, keep a chin up. CanadianCaesar Cæsar is turn’d to hear 05:35, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks. And on the same day, Gremlins 2 becomes a good article.  Must be my lucky day! CanadianCaesar Cæsar is turn’d to hear 22:02, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
 * BTW, would you like to weigh in on Gremlins 2, which is at FAC right now? CanadianCaesar Cæsar is turn’d to hear 03:42, 14 June 2006 (UTC)

Congratulations
Congratulations on your third featured article! Halloween III made it. I hope this convinces you to come back. Clearly you are an asset to Wikipedia. CanadianCaesar Cæsar is turn’d to hear 00:13, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
 * By the way, do you know how to nominate your articles to get them on the main page? The page is here. Today's featured article/requests CanadianCaesar Cæsar is turn’d to hear 17:57, 6 June 2006 (UTC)

Night of the Living Dead
Good work. I've made some minor copy edits. There are a few red links; not sure what to do about them. --Myles Long 16:30, 24 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Again, good work on that article. I'm not sure what the policy is regarding templates vs. categories, but I don't see any reason there shouldn't be both.  A template often eliminates the "need" for a "see also" list.  Unlike a category, it doesn't require any extra clicks to get to the links to related articles if a template is present.  That's not to say that templates are always appropriate.  So, to answer your question, it's not really necessary, but (I think) it doesn't violate policy and helps with navigation.  That's just my $0.02, though.  I'll look around and see if I can find any precendents. --Myles Long 21:43, 9 July 2006 (UTC)

Good Work
Brilliant work with Night of the Living Dead. You got any other horror films in your sights? I hope you put Night of the Living Dead up for peer review, and have it featured.

You should mention in Halloween (sorry I kinda consider it your baby) that Christopher Lee was originally offered the role of Dr. Loomis, but turned it down. It's on the official DVD in a bio taken from a horror critique book, either by Stephen Jones or Kim Newman. LuciferMorgan 00:34, 25 June 2006 (UTC)

Thank you
Thank you, Dmoon. But remember, on the original Halloween FAC, Marskell wrote "suggest this could be used as template for other film FAs." That was advice I took for the Gremlins articles. CanadianCaesar Et tu, Brute? 05:32, 25 June 2006 (UTC)

Halloween film series
WOW! The work you did on Halloween, Halloween II and Halloween III was brilliant, ae you going to do the same to the rest of the Halloween series (i.e. 4, 5, 6) ect, as they are really laking alot of info, just a suggestion, if you will or are considering it leave a post on my talk page. Jackp 11:08, 4 July 2006 (UTC)

Re: Jabba the Hutt
Sure thing, I'll take a look. – Mipadi 11:58, 6 July 2006 (UTC)

Good work!


Excellent work. You are amassing quite a collection :-). If you want, I could use some help promoting Clone Wars (Star Wars) to Good Article status by rounding out the references. I doubt I'm going to push it for FA, because it's not really "general" enough. &mdash; Deckill e r 17:25, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

Night of the Living Dead's Quality
I reckon Night of the Living Dead should be a featured article. I'd nominate it myself, only I can't understand how to do this procedure. You should nominate it yourself. When it's nominated, tell me so I can vote for it. LuciferMorgan 21:03, 12 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm just wondering, have you noticed the article for Dawn of the Dead? Truly bad with length, its 67kb and cites no refs no nothing. Hope you find the time to take the plunge and improve this article, even if its just to cut down its length by placing some of the info in sister articles. I'm in the very early stages of doing a rewrite for Nightmare on Elm Street, I'm hoping that goes fine, would be nice to get it to at least good article status. Once I've done it I hope you'll take a quick look. LuciferMorgan 18:55, 15 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I read this review once regarding NOTLD which accredits it with the decline of the Hammer style horror films. It was in a book by Gavin Baddeley called "Goth Chic" LuciferMorgan 18:55, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

Halloween
I got the Lee / Loomis info from the 8 disc box set. It's on the extras as a readable bio of the film written by some renowned horror critic. Your NOFTLD work's amazing, there any other horror articles you're eyeing up to transform? I'm real interested to know...

I've always wanted to do something like you do with the Nightmare on Elm Street article, though cannot for the life of me find the time. I have to prepare for two band phone interviews at the moment, as I do voluntary work for a rock music website called www.rockdetector.com. I hope I find the time sometime soon. I'll use your film edits as a guide (an invaluable one at that). LuciferMorgan 22:51, 12 July 2006 (UTC)

Star Wars articles
I know I've said this once before, but great job on the Star Wars articles you've rewritten. You're a great asset to the community, and I hope you stick around—and keep rewriting those articles! – Mipadi 13:26, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

Quotes
When quoting from a website / book, what formatting instructions does one have to write into the text of an article? I'm finding it awfully confusing - I don't know how to do it! LuciferMorgan 23:55, 14 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm speaking about referencing. Once you know what you wish to quote from, how do you add it? Of course all the reference sources are then named under the "Notes" and "References" sections. Like say I wanted to say the Seattle Times said "blah blah blah" about a film and I actually knew the URL for this review, how would I be able to do this? Sorry to ask, just you seem an expert on editing films now. LuciferMorgan 09:35, 15 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the help. Believe me, you've been most helpful. LuciferMorgan 13:30, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

Night of the Living Dead
As always, incredible work. Question: the quote, "don't know if there was an actual working script! We would go over what basically had to be done, then just did it the way we each felt it should be done" doesn't have a footnote. Is footnote 21, appearing after the blockquote, intended to cover this also, or is there a missing footnote?--Fuhghettaboutit 04:02, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
 * : -)--Fuhghettaboutit 04:09, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

Children(')s(') series
Of course I defer to you as the main writer. However, it's plural and possessive. Note this google fight.--Fuhghettaboutit 05:20, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

Advice
Hey Dmoon, I was wondering if you could give some advice on Gremlins. I'm wondering about the prose in "Background": "Before the 1984 film, gremlins had already made a mark on popular culture. Children's author Roald Dahl had published a book called The Gremlins in 1943.  Dante had read The Gremlins and claimed this book had been of some influence to Gremlins.  Falling Hare, a film about the fictional character Bugs Bunny and a gremlin, had been released by Warner Bros., also in 1943." How many, in any, "had been"s should be changed to "was"? Also in "Casting", do you think that should be "Axton's voice earned him the role of the narrator, to establish some context for the story? What do you think of the new picture?  I figured I should add something like that.  Especially since the toy image might/should be removed- its copyright status has always had more jeers than cheers.  Incidentally, I think Night of the Living Dead is your best work to date.  Cheers, CanadianCaesar Et tu, Brute? 21:25, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
 * No thanks, I think that's okay for now. Mostly I want to move on and try something else, though the couple things I've thought of expanding, I couldn't find references.  CanadianCaesar Et tu, Brute? 04:04, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

you deserve this
I also put this on your main page. Hope you don't mind. -ScotchMB 02:05, 20 July 2006 (UTC)

Canon stuff
Honestly, I hate the whole canon-non canon debate. Wikipedia isn't a fansite, so non-canon stuff doesn't belong. As for that statement on the WPSW page, I was going to ask Wookieepedian why he added it, because it confuses me, as well. I'll go ahead and remove it. &mdash; Deckill e r 02:28, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
 * No problem ^_^. By the way, I haven't been very proactive with star wars projects in the last couple days. It's because I'm getting warmed up by helping to promote Final Fantasy VIII and Final Fantasy VI to FA status, as well as prosifying some of the lists per WPFF consensus. &mdash; Deckill e r 04:31, 21 July 2006 (UTC)

Witchfinder General
Greetings. Thank you for producing such excellent work in wikipedia. Your reshaping of the Night of the Living Dead article is truly extraordinary. I was wondering if you could take the time to look at my Witchfinder General article. In my opinion, this is one of the greatest British films (horror or otherwise) of the 1960's and I'd like some suggestions on how to get this listed as a Good Article. I don't believe a GA can be self-nominated. My own Tenebrae is a Featured Article so I know I will eventually have to go the Peer Review route, but I'd like to get Witchfinder assessed/rated right now if possible. The article as is still needs some tweaks and expansion, but any advice/suggestions from you would be appreciated. Thanks.--Hal Raglan 19:06, 21 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I appreciate all of your excellent suggestions. I've incorporated them into the article, and have created stubs for Ronald Bassett and Witchfinder General (book). I'll keep expanding/tweaking the article until I think its ready for a peer review.  Thanks for your help!--Hal Raglan 03:42, 27 July 2006 (UTC)

Congratulations
Congratulations on getting Night of the Living Dead to FA. LuciferMorgan 00:08, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
 * A second on that. - dharmabum 08:28, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Truly a fantastic job. -ScotchMB 11:47, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

Re: Max Rebo Band
I think Max Rebo Band looks pretty good. Only think I can suggest is moving "Concept and creation" above the list of band members. The article might flow a bit better. – Mipadi 14:15, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

Max Rebo
Just to make sure: you're redirecting all the minor character articles/list entries to the max rebo band page....right? :-) &mdash; Deckill e r 19:12, 27 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Absolutely not a problem; it was how I was planning on doing the next phase of merges and reorganization. Glad to see it already underway. I won't be back to the star wars articles for a few more days yet; still some Final Fantasy articles to work on to get warmed up :-) I did work on copyediting TPM for the others, though. &mdash; Deckill e r 19:30, 27 July 2006 (UTC)

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 * Working on it. Dmoon1 08:11, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Could use a bit of help
Hey, if you get a chance, I'm working on making Rogue Squadron have a more out-of-universe perspective. Unfortunately, you seem to have much better writing skills in that regard than I. I've fleshed out a good structure, but if you have a chance, it might be worth a look. I know you're probably busy working on other articles, but if you have some spare time, I'd very much appreciate it. – Mipadi 14:37, 1 August 2006 (UTC)

Rogue Squadron
Just a little tip with out of universe perspective: make sure you don't sacrifice succinct prose. Sometimes, when we try to write from an OOU perspective, we may say redundant things like "to the player" or "in Star Wars". &mdash; Deckill e r 17:42, 1 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Absolutely; looks great. &mdash; Deckill e r 18:35, 1 August 2006 (UTC)