User:Dmt2/Eritrean Liberation Front/Matt Ndirangu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Dylan Taylor)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dmt2/Eritrean_Liberation_Front?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The page is well written and structured, not too sure if it's a new page or an expanded one but its really informative. I think it would be beneficial to include some photo attachments on it to give the readers an idea of where the conflict is taking place. I think the overall tone used is neutral i didnt really feel like you were taking a stance or sharing an opinion on the topic you are discussing so keep it up im sure you will have a good end product.

Response to peer review: I added images and maps to illustrate where key conflicts are taking place.