User:Dmwhite98/Psychosis/Ashleyff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dmwhite98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dmwhite98/Psychosis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the further explanation you provided for a ventral striatal, it helped to clarify. I also like how you added a small explanation to anhedonia, but I think it needs more of a definition instead of just, "lack of pleasure" because it is more than lack of pleasure, it is also lack of interest and so on. After you explain anhedonia once, you do not need to add the definition anymore if the word anhedonia is used again. Anhedonia is also misspelled in the article as well, you could add to the article and fix that as well. "When high reports of negative symptoms were recorded, there were significant irregularities in the left VS. While anhedonia, the inability to feel pleasure, is a commonly reported symptom in psychosis; hedonia, the ability to feel pleasure, experiences are present in most people with schizophrenia."