User:Dnbell/Sleep deprivation/Cjackson1215 Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info


 * Whose work are you reviewing?    (Dnbell)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sleep deprivation

Lead

Guiding questions:


 * The article has a-lot of    corrections to them and very well cited. It gave a very clear     understanding to sleep deprivation and put the information in the correct     format in the right place.
 * Each lead sentence was lead    consoles and wasn't off topic it went in depth about sleep deprivation     with new information that wasn't on there.
 * Each sentence was lead by a    correct title at the beginning of each paragraph. It had a very well     precisely written paragraphs.
 * The lead sentence that is present    in the article has a lead sentence but there were things included such as     sleep deprivation also known as Sleep deprivation, also known     as insufficient sleep or sleeplessness, is     the condition of not having enough sleep.
 * Reading the information there was    a good amount of information and it was well detailed.

Lead evaluation

Content

Guiding questions:


 * Each content that was entered in    the paragraph was on topic.
 * Each day that this person saved    their content it was up to date on the day they save it.

Content evaluation

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Each of the following paragraphs that had information that was inserted it gave me a better understanding of what sleep deprivation is. It went into a more detailed explanation in case I was unsure of what sleep deprivation was.

Tone and balance evaluation

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Each of the links that was inserted into the article worked. It showed where this person got her information from.

Sources and references evaluation

Organization

Guiding questions:

Each of the sections were well written out and the header went with what the paragraph was going to discuss next. To include none of the content looked like it may have went into other information that wasn't about sleep deprivation.

Organization evaluation

Images and Media

Guiding questions:

The following section with pictures there weren't many pictures, but the one that was visual went well of what sleep deprivation actually looks like.

Images and media evaluation

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

The following information that was added onto to the article was alot of help.It helped the article get a more detailed view of what sleep deprivation is, what this person can go through during sleep deprivation, it also gives you a look at what sleep deprivation actually looks like.

Overall evaluation

What type of images would be great addition to the article? (Dnbell (talk) 04:22, 14 October 2019 (UTC))