User:Dnh22/Deaf plus/Cgaramos Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dnh22


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 * User:Dnh22/Deaf plus


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi there! Thanks for this wonderful article. I think your current content as well as the outline are looking really solid. Your list-out and explanation for each of the conditions is looking incredibly solid. However, as a reader fairly unfamiliar with Deaf Plus beforehand, I do wish there was a bit more about the social positioning/reception of this concept (is it a concept? Is it a movement? A medical term? I couldn't completely place it). Additionally, you may absolutely already be headed in this direction for the "Language" section of the piece that is there, but I think a section dedicated to the overall response/handling of these conditions by those who interact with Deaf Plus individuals. Have there been medical/educational/social movements surrounding this? Any legislative barriers (since I know the medical field is not always accommodating to Deaf individuals)? I think a little bit more context as to the surrounding buzz around each of your specified conditions would really bring the whole thing together.