User:Doas52/New Deal/JKBrenner Peer Review

General info
Doas52
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Doas52/New Deal
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * New Deal

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead

The new lead in the sandbox focuses on the American Liberty League which opposed the New Deal. It doesn't seem to reflect the content.

Content

The content is more of a review of the article it focuses on rather than information of the New Deal

Organization

It is well written but at times it isn't neutral. For example "Overall, Invisible Hands is a fantastic article for delving into the business and political world of the 1930’s" is a very biased statement.

Overall, this article could serve as an important resource for the sections that describe the opposition within the New Deal page.